Alright because I am noticing I do not have the attention span or the creativity to write full stories I am just going to post scenes from stories because that is all I am capable to do at the moment.
P.S This one is a bit more graphic if I remember correctly.
The fire was bright in contrast to the mornings darkness, the a gently wind blowing the dancing fire around the pit. I had been keeping sentry duty for night while my brother slept, the battle from the night before had taken much of his energy away. I looked down at the camp and my sleeping brother from the tree I was perched in and kept watching making sure nothing came to disturb our rest. I heard a rustle off in the bushes and jumped down from my branch, rolling to absorb the falls momentum. I followed the sound of the animal hoping to hunt down some meat for our breakfast. I followed the sound until I could no longer see anything, admitting defeat I slowly returned to camp. “AGGGH” I heard my brother scream and raced make to the sound of the voice, my heart pumping, adrenaline already pouring into my blood ready to fight whatever was attacking him.
I got back to camp and saw nothing, my brother was sitting up in his bedroll, sweep dripping from his body, but not soldier or animal to be seen.
“ What happened,” I asked “Why the did you scream?”
“I had that nightmare again,” Leo explained “the one where I am murdered in the dungeon!” Leo finished with a gasp. I looked at him his dirty blond hair matted down with sweet and dirt, his face was a mess from weeks in the forests trying to evade the people who still hunted us.
The wind had turned cold and I looked at the campsite. Our bedrolls, our weapons, a small fire and what little food was left from our last successful hunt. I heard a rustle behind be a knew that whatever it had made the noise was not some animal inspecting our camp.
I turned around a saw a man dress in dark armour with the seal of the emperor and the helmet.
“ You are under arrest for violating the emperors law. You both are wanted by the emperor. I have been sent to capture, or kill you both.” The soldier said the last words with such emphasises I knew that was he planned to do.
“There is two of us and one of you,” I said laughing “your emperor is getting careless.” I looked at the soldier and saw him smile. I could hear a thump from behind me and my brother screaming.
“BEHIND YOU BROTHER!!”
I felt a sudden pain on the back of my skull and then nothing the last thing I remember before everything went dark was thinking to myself The emperor didn’t get careless. We did!”
From the eyes of Leo
“BROTHER!” I screamed I saw the man jump from the bushes and hit Barachiel in the back of the head, his body went limp and he fell. I saw his face contorted in pain, his red hair matted together with blood and dirt. The man who had assaulted Barachiel know stood there and laughed, relishing in his victory. I saw our weapons on the ground next to me I picked up the sword closest to me, my brother’s sword. I took the sword off the ground and went for the kill rage, and adrenaline fuelling my actions. I did not hesitate and before the man with the club could turn around and I had killed him. His head cut clean off blood still pumping for the veins in his neck, his legs crumbled beneath the weight of the body and the man collapsed, his head rolled off to the side in a pool of his own blood. I looked at the messenger, the man who distracted my brother and charged. The messenger had expected this and quickly knocked my sword away and recovered faster than I could and cut my shoulder. I could feel the warm blood ooze out of the wound. I looked down and saw my brother moving again, he was slowly crawling away from the combat. I turn my head back to the combat just in time to see the blade coming at me. I ducked the slice and cut off the mans right leg. The man yelled in pain, and fell over his leg gushing blood over patch of grass he was now lying in. I looked over at him knowing he was going to die. I let out one final bloodcurdling roar and fell to my knees. I had killed two men.
From the eyes of Barachiel
I did not know when I finally awoke, the only things I knew or remembered was that the sun was now high in the sky and blindingly bright, and my head hurt like nothing I had ever experienced. I looked over at Leo, he was my brother older only by a couple years. We may be brother I thought but we look nothing a like. He was taller by a couple inches about 6 feet tall, he was a bit slimmer then me not as much muscle, but he more agile. I was only about 5’10” but more muscular than my brother. We both had been thinned down substantially by the harsh continues of the wilderness. His face was rounder more soft edged, while my face was more angular, sharper more distinct features. His blond hair was naturally curly and always contrasted my dark red hair that always fell straight against. I tried to sit-up and with enormous effort finally managed to get myself up. I looked around and noticed some changes to the camp. I saw a bigger soldier lying on the ground his head about two feet from his body in a bloody mess. Then I saw the man who had spoken to me, lying back all color drained from his face. I saw the horror that had once been our campsite and was sick to my stomach.
Well I hope I have not mentally injured anyone here. If I did sorry. Please tell me what you think.
Fly on. Fly free,
Avian Fang
Saturday, April 25, 2009
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7 comments:
OH MY GOSH THAT IT SO GOOD! It is so creepy though! You should publish that!
Tea =D
Thanks Tea I don't think I have enough there for it be published and as for a short-story I don't think many parents will buy it for their kids.
Fly On. Fly free,
Avian Fang
You're probably right......... Maybe it should be an adult book then! (After you write more, of course) =]
That did no mental damage whatsoever, it was just entirely amazing to read! Honestly, I have nothing to say other than the fact that it truly was riveting. If that's not a weird word to use. Seriously, I was on edge in my head the whole time!!!
If you wrote an ending to it, you could totally get it published! Very H. G. Wells-ish genre, kind of odd but more exciting and not science fiction, more action/adventure/mystery... did I say awesome? 'Cuz it was!
~me
Lol thanks Aita. I think that just made by day. I am not sure if I am going to write an ending. I already have ideas for it but I am not exactly sure if I will write it.
I will think about it.
You should definitely write them! Even if you go back and change or get rid of them later, they'll still be there for inspiration! Once I wrote a whole entire story then realized I wrote it all in a way that made more sense backwards than forwards.... It was very amusing, and slightly frustrating.
~me
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